Comments for Star Wars X Webcomic

Comment on Page 008 by goku

goku — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 04:31:53 +0000

this is by far your best of the fight pages. They do actually look like they are fighting and that the moves of one character forces the other character to react accordingly.

In the second panel, you can see how the sith guy is forcing the jedi to reterat and vice versa in the third.

I really like the last two panels and always think your coloring is super cool ( I would love to see you ink the jedi chick I drew).

There are a couple of things that stand out. The first panel, I think the trajectory of the swords is off. Not sure beut either they are too close or I think the vapor from the swords should go through one another, otherwise it looks like the swords don’t touch.
In the last panel, the top half of the sith guy is perfect but his legs don’t look like they go with the body. (does not look like it is attached) Continue the line from the hips and you’ll see what I mean. Otherwise real cool, I look forward to seeing the next page. Hey when does the other guy get involved? Or is too cool for this fight.

Comment on Page 007 by goku

goku — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 03:11:36 +0000

hey mift,
I like the last panel in this page. i really like how you have him standing outside the panel. There is something wrong with his forearm in the second panel but for the most page it looks nice. I’m not too crazy about the lighsaber affect in the second panel, looks off

Comment on Page 007 by MIFTY

MIFTY — Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:50:51 +0000

So, page 007 is finally up. Sorry for the long delay, but I had other programming and design works to take care of. Anyways, this page continues the lightsaber fight between Nai'Kage and the un-named Jedi. After The comment I recieved from Harvey Blaze and Dave on Page 006, I made the un-named Jedi less angry...

Comment on Star Wars: The Force Unleashed 2 vs Star Wars X by MIFTY

MIFTY — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 17:22:27 +0000

hehehe. I guess that all those years of studying the art of Jim Lee paid off…

Comment on Page 006 by Dave

Dave — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 17:21:15 +0000

The angry thing?

The Jedi are trained not to give into their emotions, but it didn’t always work out. But the expression might be more of an artistic rendering…

Comment on Page 006 by Harvey Blaze

Harvey Blaze — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 03:38:33 +0000

your Jedi looks pretty angry. I though Jedi were not supposed to give in to evil emotions like anger. other than that, nice page. love the colors

Comment on Star Wars: The Force Unleashed 2 vs Star Wars X by Steven Severt

Steven Severt — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:40:50 +0000

I’m pretty excited about TFU2, but honestly your picture is more interesting. It’s not that I don’t appreciate awesome 3D renderings and all, but the art style and colors for this comic have a much cooler feel. I’d rather see the game art and packaging look like this artwork than covered with 3D models.

Comment on Page 006 by Steven Severt

Steven Severt — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 15:16:30 +0000

Cool action stuff. Can’t wait to get some more of the story! Sorry I didn’t notice this page until now…I keep forgetting that I’m subscribed to this one at Belfry, and their system sucks. Anyway, great stuff. Can’t wait for more!

Comment on Page 006 by Leprashawn

Leprashawn — Wed, 20 Jan 2010 01:03:56 +0000

Pretty cool lightsaber fight. I’m really loving the saber effects. keep it up.

Comment on Page 005 by Dan

Dan — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 14:25:11 +0000

This is great stuff, each panel conveys a lot of action. Keep it coming!